No no, thank you! *bows in elaborate manner vaguely reminiscent of Byzantium*
I am still hoping seascribe will finish her story too - it was quite different (as far as I read) to yours and multiple interpretations of paintings are interesting! (plus, of course I want ALL the stories, mwahahaha)
Actually jain did the same with the lighting on the other art entry I did, and it was fine, I didn't feel the need to adjust that one. But with this one, because I just wasn't happy with it overall, the scene you described suggested something I could easily adjust that might improve things, and I think it has, actually.
I think the first version looked a bit more static, somehow - darkening the sky and the shadows I think gave things a bit more movement and interest.
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Date: 2012-10-28 02:26 pm (UTC)I am still hoping seascribe will finish her story too - it was quite different (as far as I read) to yours and multiple interpretations of paintings are interesting! (plus, of course I want ALL the stories, mwahahaha)
Actually jain did the same with the lighting on the other art entry I did, and it was fine, I didn't feel the need to adjust that one. But with this one, because I just wasn't happy with it overall, the scene you described suggested something I could easily adjust that might improve things, and I think it has, actually.
I think the first version looked a bit more static, somehow - darkening the sky and the shadows I think gave things a bit more movement and interest.