To Devon & back
Feb. 23rd, 2025 10:08 am( Read more... )Oh, and I completed my founding of the Shire story: There and Back Again (to Norbury of the Kings)
I finished writing my Tolkien RSB story, Angmar Rising. It's a story about Glorfindel arriving in Rivendell in the Third Age and having an adventure in Rhudaur.
The art I wrote for was a picture of Glorfindel in armour looking back at himself in the years of peace by Sempermoi, and it's very well done.
I had terrible trouble getting to the end of the story and eventually wrote the end in a great rush close to the deadline. Next year I really am going to give TRSB a miss: I think I prefer to do writing in the winter and doing sunny day things when the sun is here.
The War of Wrath has been raging for thirty-five years. Now the Enemy has found a new strategy. He’s set a trap.

Anyway, I wrote a chapter, with no Volvo but there is a dragon and a bunch of ravens, and it's here.
Oh, also my car (ironically, an ancient Volvo, though when I started writing the story my car was a Saab) went in for its MOT and failed, but the garage seems optimistic that it can be tweaked and fettled sufficiently to pass, which would be good since second-hand cars seem to be thin on the ground at the moment (presumably because people are trying to avoid public transport).
We shall see. It currently has 160,000+ miles on the clock, one of the rear doors is very bashed, the driver door is a different colour and the window doesn't work, and nor does the sun roof, so it is at least aging. But it's still surprisingly nice to drive, and also there is an excellent feeling of invincibility to it. Anything short of a lorry that drives into it is is probably going to come off worse and leave little sign of impact. And you can get a lot of stuff in it.
and my two stories were:
Tuor and Idril sailed away into the West, and were lost. But how did that happen, and what came next?
I really can't decide if I like this story or not. It somehow feels like it's not as entertaining as it should be for the amount of effort I put into it.
Whereas the other one came much more easily, and I think is probably a better story even if it was quicker and shorter.
When Summer Warms the Hanging Fruit and Burns the Berry Brown
Rúnar of the Vanyar and Minyen of the Avari were born in Middle-earth, long before the rising of the Sun. One went to Valinor and followed Yavanna, but the other wandered far from the lake of Cuivienen into the great forests of the south of Middle-earth. Neither ever came into any tale of Beleriand, but both of them in different ways felt the power of Yavanna.
And the art I submitted was this one: the Shiremoot Zoom Meeting.

I'm not sure I'm wild about the execution, but I am still very delighted by Gaffer Gamgee having a potato avatar.
The story for this was You Have No Authority Here, Lobelia Sackville-Baggins and it made me laugh out loud at several points.
The Tuor and Idril story is done, and after much prodding and poking, seems a decent shape.
The Tropical Yavanna story came together really quickly in the end. It's a story that is half Vanyar and half Avari and *mostly* worldbuilding.
They will be live... when is it? A week? Two? Something like that anyway.
I really want to finish Rexque Futurus next. I've been writing it for seven years, this MUST surely be the year when I get chapters 13 and 14 polished off and can finally say to myself 'IT IS DONE!'
I have rough drafts for both chapters, so it really should be possible.
This story was about Tuor & Idril. I hadn't written them before, and I'm really not convinced I've done a good job. The story seems over-long and rather unwieldy, and it has a kind of wobbly saggy bit which I am really not sure how to fix.
But it has a beginning, a middle and an end.
Perhaps I can revise and trim it a bit later. The second story for TRSB is well underway and I hope that will be shorter and not so flabby.
I am trying to finish off my first Tolkien reverse summer bang story, which is about a slight AU Idril and Tuor. I hadn't written Idril before (have written Tuor before, but he was a sealion skinchanger then, so arguably not very canon either!)
I like the idea, and I'm over the minimum word-count, but somehow the story hasn't quite taken wing.
I think what I'm struggling with is that Tuor and Idril have neither of them done a thing wrong in their entire lives, so far as I can tell, and are also enormously competent. I do like a competent character, but a character with weaknesses is perhaps easier to relate to. Or maybe it's just a 3/4 done stall and I just need to get the end of it finished.