I will soon be able to actually comment on your fics, I hope! This one was lovely, so sweet and (knowning what we know) sad. I particuarly like the bit about the Elves never noticing that the Dwarves keep having the same King. I am quite sure that the Elves would not notice a change in Narvi either. Keeping track of time as it applies to mortals does not seem to be an Elvish thing.
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Date: 2017-12-22 11:10 am (UTC)Also, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!