Regrets

[bunn]

Regrets  : 2544 words, Gen.  Curufin, in the Halls of Mandos, does his homework.

Five pages of regrets, written in a language no-one knows. I’ll parcel them up and give them to the Maiar of Mandos. Who knows? Perhaps I will have bought a little of my father’s time, which like his Silmarils is stolen from him and held by others who have no right to claim it.

Comments

[r-blackcat.livejournal.com]

Oh. I'll try to pay atention to dialogues\monologues while reading your fics.
I somehow think "I will"/"I'll" is not what works for me... But maybe some other contractions?